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Perseverance With A Twist

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hyena in petticoat
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Posted 09/13/07 - 12:40 AM:
Subject: Perseverance With A Twist
I walk

As I

Got shoved
Pulled back

As I trip
Got bruised
Bled

But still

I walk.


I drown

Into the abyss
With such strength I was pulled down

Deep

Deeper.

Why fight?

It’s all so tiring
Let it be.

It is never at fighting
That my strength is directed



Calm
I continue to walk
Hold my breath in quiet anticipation

With certainty
And an ironic smile

I know

I’d be at the end of the road

At the abyss’ deepest

Victorious.
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Posted 09/14/07 - 2:18 AM:

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