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Intrusion

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hyena in petticoat
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Posted 07/16/07 - 3:27 AM:
Subject: Intrusion
Beautiful.

Beautiful.

Emotions captured with words so perfectly.
An existence familiar to another, known in fact
With an intimacy exclusive to two souls.

Kindred.

My eyes devoured in a confession
Not quite
But oh so ripe
Exploding

My heart nagged with guilt
Walking in a scene
Where hearts are poured

Not quite
But oh so full
Overwhelming

I looked away
But my mind wandered back
To those words

So beautiful.

Perfect.

Where two souls find solace
Two souls belonging

I find emptiness.

Envy.
libertygrl
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Posted 07/16/07 - 10:55 AM:

a powerful sentiment expressed so elegantly. brilliant.
hyena in petticoat
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Posted 07/17/07 - 7:13 PM:

I wasn't really expecting anybody to be able to "relate" since it was so vague.

Thanks Lib. smiling face
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