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libertygrl
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Posted 05/02/07 - 4:48 PM:
Subject: flowmotion
this thread is for poems which are inspired by the poems which precede it in the thread. in other words, all the poems in this thread are connected to each other in some way, maybe by a particular word, an idea, an emotion.

i’ll kick it off...
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you
you had me
smiling like a fool
in a school of thought
full of words i think i forgot
smiling that smile
you know the one
so much more than a face
much more than a happy place
a smile of a thousand miles
in the temple of a warm wind
that swallows you whole and lingers
in your hair like whispers
of chocolate like
strawberry
peppermint
candy
a smile on my fingers
a taste like brandy and grace
a cloud moment passing by
in a timeless sky
smiling like a fool
you had me



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Posted 05/02/07 - 6:18 PM:

second!
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why
do I
stare off into space
yearning to see your face
in the place of hard earned memories
my mind swirls deep with fantasies
i hoped in you Id find the keys
to unlock all my sanity

yet...

your mood was play
bright and gay
youd nevr stay
is what you say
my heart does pay
as your words slay
this strange foray
to hidden lands

if...

in this day
i can portray
a bettr way
to end the fray
with amor-e
with mud and clay
to earth I lay
safe in your hands

8)
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Posted 05/02/07 - 7:28 PM:

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Posted 05/02/07 - 7:44 PM:

a funny thing fling
swing from sanity to vanity
a mid-afternoon fantasy
and then what’s to become of me?

a daydream says hello
like a tiptoeing through jello
all pink orange and yellow
and it kicks me into mellow

heLLO.

downtown take it easy
lost the keys but found them breezy
in a grail full of glory
(mandatory allegory)
am i falling or am i flying?
am i living or dying?
maybe i'm just flung
among the
unsung

story

of

my

life
sings its song
to write what’s wrong
to know that i am strong
to grow where i belong
and to invite you

along
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Posted 05/02/07 - 7:54 PM:

Third
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Why, yet IF?
A timeless gift
comes with the swift
and leaves adrift.
Question. Skeptic.
Ponder, consider.
Concede, then continue.
To never demote whats within you.

Ask what brought her
How did he...yet
why question if the memory is true?
entertain the belief, that of me and you.
See what she,
and be what knew.
continue the spark
kindle the remark.
incredible is the movement
of my heart towards

how, what why. when where

Oh the Wonder of it all.
empty reality, passion dissolve.
break the back of nothing.
negotiate the neurotic of lonesome.
learn the love of moments.
mingle the memories of romance.

tickle the feet of quiet heart.
kick and giggle until a glad heart has release.
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Posted 05/03/07 - 10:28 AM:

singing softly of the one i hold dear...
yet humming so that he'll not hear.

my love is strong, and asking for reply

does he not know? have i failed?

how can i audibly sing if there are no ears?
has he stopped listening or have i too many fears?
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Posted 05/19/07 - 12:36 AM:

No secrets
No lies, No truths
No life, No death
Not serious, only jest!

A secret, a secret,
A secret I show,
no worries, no cares, to who that throws,
whats hidden, in shadow, in plane sight crawls,
away,
from,
not,
not.

A secret, a shadow, what's not, is
Plato

Depth, despair, abyss, deaths kiss.
Lost

Rejection of not, repentance from what is,
to not, or not,
not, or to
Lost, or direction.
Hope

I am at the bottom, I see all above.
I listen, understand, see, and don't love.
I am at the bottom. I was, now am
Not

What am I?
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Posted 05/20/07 - 5:39 PM:

Cut scene A, B stands. Tune in or turn off?

The poo hat quests for intuitions, strives for freedom in a pen...
Or these tic-ticky electro keys.

This poor sentimental poo hat, paranoid. Easy to discern in an infomated age, the symptom of a prolonged leisure and unexceptional education.

Plato would accuse us of preoccupation with hand shadows and body silhouettes, colored and transposed to the spinning canvas of electrified media.

Slippage goes without saying, never having left the primordial ooze, or dank cave, sticking, bonded to our impulse, there is no going back to a place from which we haven't left.

Babes suffering the moves for adaptation: bire furns, ayen ayes. .

No passing judgments here. The nature of work in gratification of being for culture, now, a member or the archetypal round.

Gather around the fire folks in the middle of the village compound. But which group is in the middle now, issuing forth a new

World soul? Or do things happen this way?



Edited by Nihil Loc on 05/20/07 - 5:44 PM
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Posted 05/21/07 - 1:53 PM:

Give it up, all that trash
sit around, find my hat
the one with dots, green and red like Santa
It is me that I wanted all along
in the middle
find the source
s e c u r i t y
no chance
rip it on and out all the way to this stupid smile
feel it done, or at least donelessness.
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Posted 05/22/07 - 2:06 PM:

I'll wear a hat with you,
For a sense of warm company.
Then will hitch a horse to a wagon
And go out into the country to find Tom Bombadil's brother.

You know this eccentric old goof in robes and a wizard's hat
Whose left profile is blue
And whose right is red...

A legend of sorts worth seeing on a Sunday afternoon.
If we are lucky, will catch him unawares, and he not us,
That his two sides are seen at once.

But don't forget your cell.
We need to capture this guy on video.
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