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Last Night

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Monk2400
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Posted 02/27/07 - 1:11 PM:
Subject: Last Night
I saw her
last night
in an amazing silky dress
with detailed but subtle embroidered patterns
running down her still shapely length so beautiful
so full of life
beaming that smile
what once melted my heart
in pleasure
and pain so graceful
she
I sat
and sopped up the sauce on my plate
as I ate
I rationalized
my position in feably comforting confidence
I shant look on I shant
yearn for what is
now
past
I am here and
I chose
this place
I twirl
my bread around and round
drawing highways of memories
in this deep orange sauce.
libertygrl
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Posted 02/27/07 - 1:36 PM:

this ranks in my top favorite poems of all time. beautiful imagery and flow. it's awesome, i love it! clap
Monk2400
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Posted 02/27/07 - 2:43 PM:

holy chiopolte! now that is high praise. blushblushwheewheezen

thnx!!!!!!''peace
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