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Yogi Bear
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Posted 12/04/06 - 5:45 PM:
Subject: Brick Layers
I take bricks
from the world
in order to build
my home

but I can only see
the bricks that compliment
the latest layer
I am working through
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Posted 12/05/06 - 12:14 PM:

Yogi

There is more in your poem than immediately meets the eye. I'm working on it though!

Thanks for the wisdom.

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Posted 12/05/06 - 12:16 PM:

Thanks, e. I'm glad it was recieved. whee
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Posted 12/10/06 - 6:48 PM:

Building a home shouldn't mean that we are building these walls meant to make us blind to the world... as all the world is our home.

Beautiful and eloquent. I really enjoyed it.
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Posted 12/10/06 - 11:10 PM:

OxygenJunkie wrote:
Building a home shouldn't mean that we are building these walls meant to make us blind to the world... as all the world is our home.

Beautiful and eloquent. I really enjoyed it.


The realization that "all the world is our home", is what I envisioned building. The temple...

Thank you, kindly.
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Posted 12/11/06 - 6:18 PM:

Open the door and sit down
You are welcomed here
Everything you see
Is the real me.

Look into my soul if you like
But don’t break me
Cos I can’t fix anything no more.

You can turn everything around
You are allowed to touch or watch
If you are never going to break me.
Now close the door and sit down
While you are here with me.

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Posted 12/12/06 - 12:10 AM:

look on me
with an eternal eye.
a child's gaze.
i ask you with my soul
for your curiosity
will make me beautiful
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Posted 12/12/06 - 9:52 AM:

Yes I can hear you
Can even see what’s going on
in your mind
don’t be scared about it
Help is on the way to you.

For a while I though I have lost you
for a while I though I could never love
you but for now I can tell you that for sure
help is on the way to you.

I know you wait for me to forgive you
I know you are good at heart
so my heart will be good to you.







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Posted 12/12/06 - 8:23 PM:

Release me from the past
I humbly beg of you
and except this request
as invitation
to your own experience
of peace

no heart is whole
with one ear to the past
listen intently in the now
allowing both ears
to vibrate the heaven
of these words

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Posted 12/13/06 - 3:40 AM:

Come in, sit down and I’ll listen to you.
Get a tea, talk to me and we shall see.

Rest you head on my shoulder and
I will scare away your childhood sectors
and soon you’ll be free.
Come-on out we will kiss the moon
firs you, than me.

Don’t be scared about tomorrow
Cos I am here.
Take a look into your marrow
Can you see, there are two
Cos there are two, you and me
me and you.



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Posted 12/15/06 - 12:07 AM:

tea please
without milk, but sweet
perhaps we could have
a bite to eat

a lonely friend is
in town
can we pull of a third stool
he can make introductions
as our tea cools


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Posted 12/15/06 - 4:08 PM:

Who is it ?

Is he nice, is he bright, is he lovely
Open the door and welcome your friend.

But remember granny’s old wisdom!
She says,
Tell me who are your friends,
and I tell you who you are.

Never let them influence
who you are best in love with
and never walk in their shoes.

You will lose both by the same time
you forget my words.

Now go and open the door
there might be a friend
waiting for us.


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Posted 12/15/06 - 4:19 PM:

I tried to explain
but he didn’t understand

I tried to make him see
but he was blind

I tried to make him here me
but he was deaf.

I tried to make him feel
but he was callous.

Now I am tired to try
anything no more.
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Posted 12/16/06 - 3:51 PM:

love all openly
but engage with others
proportionately
there are times to give
but even a mighty oak
must receive the earth's
unconditional bounty
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Posted 12/16/06 - 4:56 PM:

Walking out of my house
sitting under your tree
yes I like the way
you are protecting me.

Wind form the South
will warm a frozen heart.

Blood on my hands and
on my heart still remembers
the time when we were
drifting apart.

Wonderful old tree please
never lose me.

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Posted 12/17/06 - 4:18 PM:

In your garden

let me place three trees

One for you

One for me

one for the child

I had wished so much

from you.

In your garden

let us plant

all the secrets

of your past

that it will never effect

our future.





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Posted 12/17/06 - 7:49 PM:

lovely in form
it listens and needs
dances with love
bending like reeds
the pace of a waltz
the way of the child
wind blowing kisses
and a sigh from the
beguiled
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Posted 12/18/06 - 12:17 AM:

we cannot own
the fruits of our actions
to fulfill desire or avoid pain
to do so
prompts the mind to act
secretly

a spoke on a wheel
does not turn alone
but shares all results
with the circle of life
equally

conflicting spokes
make square wheels
spokes made of love
turn in elegant cycles
blissfully
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Posted 12/18/06 - 4:29 PM:

Wake me up when you are ready

Shake me well when you love me again

Just push me.

Pull my hair if I am wrong here

Play with my fantasy to get me going

Cos I am already wandering towards you.


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Posted 01/04/07 - 4:48 PM:

Tomorrow I’ll be gone to bury what doesn’t belong to me.

Your frozen heart.

Your ignorance.

Your lack of tolerance

Your reluctance to listen.

Your way of making me suffer.

Your anger.

Your disability to love.



From now on

You can never change what happens

You can never call for help because the
house is empathy and the flame has cooled.

The stone of the wise is put down and blind
all her memories of last nights dream.

Oh yes I have seen your face, coming and going
leaving me here alone in the dark.

Oh yes I could feel your body, laying next to me
dressed in black a fake smiling face
soon you disappeared in the dark
where you came from.

Your game is over and you have lost here.
Tour chance to win back were missed because
now I see through you were not serious about it
otherwise
you would have made things all right between us
but you didn’t cos you never wanted to.

And tomorrow I’ll be gone to bury my sadness
about you.


















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Posted 01/04/07 - 10:50 PM:

She, the one I can trust
Cos I know, she cares.

She, the only one who stay,
and listen
when all the others had gone.

She, the wonderful with her
big brown eyes and a
soft nose,
comforting me through the night.

You know, it’s her who stays
right here with me tonight
happily as she is.

It’s her who’s embracing me
with her warm heart
never hurting me.

Wonderful, wonderful girl
is never leaving me here,
it’s her who always know
what I feel for her.

Wonder what reason you have

to hut with your doubtfulness
to cause pain with your distrust
to stay away when I need you must
to refuse to listen when I am in pain

of course you are not like her because
you are …………………………….
How could I ever forget who you realy are.






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