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It's just a tedious poem of mine

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IammyaspectofUs
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Posted 04/17/06 - 1:57 PM:
Subject: It's just a tedious poem of mine
If one seeks to be a master, what better to master than oneself.

For mastering a tasking mastery could put freewill on a shelf.

Mastered as a master, enslaved as a slave,

The tasker taskmaster, tasks mastering as a slave,

Enslaving the master, enlightening the task game,

The enslaved taskmaster is mastered by the game.

The game masters he, enslaving him in task,

The game is the master, the game of mastering task.

But what of the freedom, of the enslaved taskmaster,

Would he not seek freedom, and escape with his will,

Will the taskmaster allow himself evolution still?

Without the game will he find his mind sane?

For the game it did hide from him his own shame

Will he forgive the need to cast with the same?

Releasing the need of his labeling blame.

His head in his hands, his hands about his head,

Will he can be now, if he chooses will instead.

With he as his will his own heart may have his fill.

Will he be the master of the game of his own freewill?
IammyaspectofUs
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Posted 04/18/06 - 2:12 AM:

yeah I hate the flow of this, it's so hard to read. I'm new to writing and so the story goes... But thanks for the advice.

I've never read Nietzshce, and haven't heard to many fun things about his work.
someday...
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