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A Ranting Rap

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KinNaoko90
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Posted 03/23/11 - 5:45 PM:
Subject: A Ranting Rap
Confusion swamps us
It haunts us to know
That we know nothing
Ain't that something?
In the end we're alone
All alone in this world
Where all the others are goin'
Senseless! They're goin' senseless!
Blind and deaf on their own
Closed their eyes and plugged their ears
To the screams for help
Go to hell - disappear
You can't hear you can't see
All this pain and misery
As for us, here we stand
Holding out a hand
For those who may need it
Can't you see? Can't you try?
To have an open mind
"It just is?!" Are you for real?
Such ideals hurt and never heal
We won't accept this
Nor respect this
It's like you want us to believe
That the ideal of change is a dream
Well a dream it may be
If you believe in "It just is"
But in the real world there are choices
And we choose to... live!
KinNaoko90
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Posted 03/23/11 - 5:52 PM:

Some of the 'healing' quotes that the idiot staff at Psychiatric Hospitals use I never really take to. "It just is" one of them.

Why the heck should I have to be satisfied with the way the world is right now? Why should I have to believe that I can't change the world and that it will likely never change? Give me a break! If someone as mentally ill as Jesus likely was could change the world in such drastic ways, then could you tell me why I can not?
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Posted 03/23/11 - 8:32 PM:

clap

have you ever been to a real open mic with poetry readings n stuff? i think you would be great at it! this piece is begging to be read out loud!
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Posted 03/31/11 - 10:12 AM:

Thanks lib, that means a lot coming from you.

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