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Regress Redress

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Monk2400
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Posted 09/27/10 - 4:46 AM:
Subject: Regress Redress
oh
how she taunts me
from her
facebook page

I'm engaged

I'm enraged
or engorged
feelings forged

at a time when
we were close
one small dose

and

everything shows

clear-ly
in
retro-spect

I suspect
things would be dif
rent


but it was not meant to be-e-e
setting sail on separate seas
she is her and I am me-e-e
the past falls away
like autumn leaves

I'm gettin older
getting bolder
but I still get
the cold shoulder

maybe it's
just me
pretense falls away
like autumn leaves


left with nothing but dreams
clashing metal monkeys
smashing up all my trees
the rabbits all hide in the autumn leaves

the past drifts away on a sweet cool breeze
leaving me standing there
in the
streets

libertygrl
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Posted 09/29/10 - 12:10 AM:

"but it was not meant to be-e-e
setting sail on separate seas
she is her and I am me-e-e"

stringing the e's out here makes for a poignant lamentation, makes me think of wolves howling in the night.

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Thinker13
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Posted 09/30/10 - 3:12 AM:

Leibniz used to write much worse poetry Monk2400! grinlaughingwink

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Monk2400
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Posted 10/01/10 - 12:11 PM:

Thinker13 wrote:
Leibniz used to write much worse poetry Monk2400! grinlaughingwink

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what an odd comment..! kooky
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