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libertygrl
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Posted 09/16/10 - 2:02 AM:
Subject: funnel
little moon, little thief,
sail in on a stolen belief,
take me to the island,
cut me while i'm down
on the ground.

it's a matter of thickening
and sticking the ladder
into something a little
fatter, maybe coming out
a little sadder, on a
sadder day.

oh jimmy, i jumped right in
and shimmied down the funnel
so i could get to the point.

get to the exit.
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Posted 09/17/10 - 2:09 PM:

It's kind of interesting (especially the first few lines), but I have no idea what it means. Probably my brain is broken.
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Posted 09/18/10 - 11:15 AM:

'Beautiful lines and good meter in my opinion'. It does not matter though, that I fail completely fail what it is insinuating towards.wink
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Posted 09/21/10 - 2:17 PM:

thanks guys smiling face

i meant for it to be interpreted freely, so i had intentionally left it on the esoteric side. as for my own interpretation, i think of it as an expression of coping with life. a few clues. little moon, little thief = darker aspects of life. take me to the island = creating a sense of isolation in me. thickening = thickening one's skin but still feeling sad about it.

the funnel can be about various different things, i'll leave that part as food for thought.

cheers,
lib
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Posted 09/30/10 - 3:15 AM:

libertygrl wrote:
thanks guys smiling face

i meant for it to be interpreted freely, so i had intentionally left it on the esoteric side. as for my own interpretation, i think of it as an expression of coping with life. a few clues. little moon, little thief = darker aspects of life. take me to the island = creating a sense of isolation in me. thickening = thickening one's skin but still feeling sad about it.

the funnel can be about various different things, i'll leave that part as food for thought.

cheers,
lib



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