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muse
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muse
Posted 12/09/09 - 9:52 PM:
Subject: thoughts of the day
thoughts of the day are floating free
without the weight of worry
too many to catch so i let them be
i'm in no hurry.

feelings swirl and twist inside
but no urgent aches to mend,
still breathing, haven't died
guess it's not the end.

trying to find a path thru the pain
not sure its worth the time
do they think me insane
hiding inside the rhyme?

music warms the chilly air
and holds me as i cry
lifting me without a care
to release a quiet sigh.

Thinker13
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Posted 08/19/10 - 2:39 AM:

muse wrote:
thoughts of the day are floating free
without the weight of worry
too many to catch so i let them be
i'm in no hurry.

feelings swirl and twist inside
but no urgent aches to mend,
still breathing, haven't died
guess it's not the end.

trying to find a path thru the pain
not sure its worth the time
do they think me insane
hiding inside the rhyme?

music warms the chilly air
and holds me as i cry
lifting me without a care
to release a quiet sigh.




A beautiful song.hug
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