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Tristan and Iseut

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Zum
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Posted 10/22/09 - 11:10 AM:
Subject: Tristan and Iseut
The chalice in their grasp

potion drained;

candle pale,

as though their blood had run

into a single, famished rose,

the lovers scan each other's faces.


Now

No more solitary roving,

holding hands with trees.

No flirtations by moonlight

with the dappled, the shaded,

the vagrant, the mainly-true;

no dancing with elves and voles.


Neither one nor two,

they keep a starry equidistance,

orbiting strange and charmed.

Beneath them lie their guardian beasts.

They too are in love.
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Posted 10/22/09 - 5:54 PM:

Zum wrote:
They too are in love.

me too, i can relate heart

gosh! beautiful.
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Posted 10/23/09 - 2:17 AM:

Neither one nor two,

they keep a starry equidistance,

orbiting strange and charmed.

Beneath them lie their guardian beasts.

They too are in love.



Very good.zen
Zum
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Posted 10/23/09 - 11:46 AM:

Thanks, Thinker!
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Posted 10/23/09 - 12:28 PM:

libertygrl wrote:

me too, i can relate heart

gosh! beautiful.



Me too. Almost eight years now. smiling face



Wonderful piece, Zum.


Love inspires to beautiful things. One of them is a magnificent song by Freddy Mercury, called Barcelona. "The moment that you stepped into the room, you took my breath away ..."
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Posted 10/23/09 - 4:17 PM:

smoki wrote:
One of them is a magnificent song by Freddy Mercury, called Barcelona. "The moment that you stepped into the room, you took my breath away ..."

awesome, i had not heard of that song. thanks!
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Posted 10/23/09 - 7:27 PM:

Thanks, Smokin!
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