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smokinpristiformis
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Posted 10/27/09 - 2:51 AM:

Is he here? :o
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Posted 10/27/09 - 10:41 AM:

no smiling face

but let's give our attention back to muse, who seems to be having a hard time these days. heart anymore poetry for us muse?
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Posted 10/27/09 - 11:21 AM:

i remember how a warm breeze
could lift my heavy thoughts away for the day

when worries would melt
even giggles would spill into the outside world

so far away now, dull ... gray, turning into another storm
so much anger
so much turmoil

i am his prisoner
fear stains my soul
only a glimmer, fading dying ...
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Posted 10/27/09 - 12:35 PM:

there's no one who can help you muse? sad
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Posted 10/27/09 - 5:53 PM:

i will go back into hiding,
where it is safe, no one will find me
i am so lonely

i can blend into the background,
where the pain subsides as i lay dormant
waiting ...

i thought i had more to give
i thought i could find happiness

i want to give someone my song before i go ...
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Posted 10/28/09 - 3:21 AM:

There's strength in you yet, muse. Make a mental fist and punch through. smiling face
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Posted 10/28/09 - 12:00 PM:

muse wrote:
i will go back into hiding,
where it is safe, no one will find me
i am so lonely

i can blend into the background,
where the pain subsides as i lay dormant
waiting ...

i thought i had more to give
i thought i could find happiness

i want to give someone my song before i go ...



Do not rush,do not run. You reach nowhere by running. That which has come into existence,was not there all the time,and hence,will definitely vanish. That which was,is, quintessence,is always going to be with you.heartpeace



Thank you.
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Posted 10/28/09 - 5:49 PM:

smooth now, i can breathe
your words, calm and wise
yet tears fall

i will hold onto these thoughts
while the darkness overtakes me yet again
i feel comfort

do you tire of me yet?
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Posted 10/31/09 - 4:00 AM:

muse wrote:
smooth now, i can breathe
your words, calm and wise
yet tears fall

i will hold onto these thoughts
while the darkness overtakes me yet again
i feel comfort

do you tire of me yet?



Tired of you? Are you joking? At least I am not. Your poetical expressions are simple and fresh!




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Posted 10/31/09 - 2:49 PM:

muse wrote:
do you tire of me yet?

not tired of you dear
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Posted 10/31/09 - 7:51 PM:

i can sooth the anger,
lyrical caresses inside your thoughts,
soaring ...

let me give you this
please,
no more pain that slashes ...
tears my soul

i cannot live with this pain
i am weak ... so fragile
inside my own silence
i cry out

please ... i only want to feel,
to breathe,
don't take this from me ...


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Posted 10/31/09 - 9:39 PM:

Beautiful poems, Muse! Please keep posting.
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Posted 11/01/09 - 6:51 PM:

Zum wrote:
Beautiful poems, Muse! Please keep posting.

thank you, but I feel they are burdensome- not your typical muse, right? i want to inspire, to show my free spirit ... but instead i seem to be the anti-muse ... arms bound, voice restrained ... sending messages in code, but never to be found
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