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Brinni
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Posted 10/14/08 - 8:19 PM:
Subject: A poem
$100 Fine


One-hundred dollar fine, love,

reserved parking.

A severe crash,

two schreeching cars, all collide, and I'm in between.

One-hundred dollar fine, love.

Can you see it?

Boundaries break,

along

with

you.

Its a sign, reserved space.

Speech

wil not

cure this orb (not that you think it would, of course).


One-hundred dollar fine, love,

reserved parking.

Until you see it,

I'll exhaust

attempting to

understand the all

of

you.



Edited by Brinni on 10/15/08 - 7:26 AM
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Posted 10/15/08 - 12:49 AM:

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Posted 10/16/08 - 1:26 AM:

Beautiful ! heartpeaceclapwhee
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Posted 10/16/08 - 5:09 PM:

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